He rode hard, his fixed on the journey ahead
His clinquant cloak flowing behind him
His beast was focused
Because,
Obey the Master, it had to
He was focused
His Belief was strong
He did not complain
Because,
Obey the Master, he had to
He'd been riding for years now
His message had to be delivered
There was no stopping now
There was no stopping now
Because,
Obey the Master, he had to
Men were giving up on the Master
He had to stop that, he knew he was late
But the message would be delivered
Because,
Obey the Master, he had to
Humans would welcome him
He would be their savior
But he knows, to the Master
He will always be just
The Messenger.
a question,is this a Jesus-God reference,or am i reading only the surface of it?
ReplyDeleteI'm getting the same vibe off this too.
ReplyDeleteBy the way:
his *eyes* fixed on the road ahead
1st line typo.
All is good.
I'm gonna reiterate what I told you online.
ReplyDeleteYou could have polished this a lot more. This had potential. Couple of sentences sound... well, disjoint. The whole piece needs to flow a bit more.