tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post2452665868859004807..comments2023-03-29T19:13:00.733+05:00Comments on Inkblot: The Burning candleThe Wandererhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09039808695031501605noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-35161856904687073382011-02-16T22:47:59.945+05:002011-02-16T22:47:59.945+05:00ahh..that...no it doesnt....:P...ahh..that...no it doesnt....:P...The Empathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811593738870172985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-43410594478034302942011-02-15T11:35:38.435+05:002011-02-15T11:35:38.435+05:00No actually, didn't try it with the music. I t...No actually, didn't try it with the music. I tried to see if it had merit unsupported.Sandhya Menonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08053854810427756673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-39758640972349833452011-02-13T16:42:31.867+05:002011-02-13T16:42:31.867+05:00choose*choose*The Empathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811593738870172985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-33732113246935631722011-02-13T16:42:20.573+05:002011-02-13T16:42:20.573+05:00hmm....did u try it with the music?...
i didnt re...hmm....did u try it with the music?... <br />i didnt really chose anything btw...its probably the most impulsive thing ive written yet....completely spontaneous so it ended up being disjointed...:/The Empathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811593738870172985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-75738004071167988322011-02-13T11:39:25.175+05:002011-02-13T11:39:25.175+05:00Okay, this didn't come together for me. What I...Okay, this didn't come together for me. What I did gather was that there is a coherent theme running through, although you chose to deliberately make it sound disjointed. As always so strong imagery is present. <br />I especially like these:<br />"Fingers intertwined. Mistakes remembered. Remorse guiding past the damned mines. Candlelight seen once more through the fog. Hazy mist endured. This time."<br /><br />"Silvery light of the moonlight shone on the contours of the familiar messiah."Sandhya Menonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08053854810427756673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-69381108979676687692011-01-16T12:19:51.626+05:002011-01-16T12:19:51.626+05:00yea....its too broken if ur not in the right state...yea....its too broken if ur not in the right state of mind. wasnt thinking when i wrote this at all.The Empathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06811593738870172985noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6200919202727235404.post-67484589792153006422011-01-16T02:18:53.187+05:002011-01-16T02:18:53.187+05:00This is so hazy yet so strong.
But takes 2 or 3 re...This is so hazy yet so strong.<br />But takes 2 or 3 reading if your are not in the desired state of mind.Cheshire.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09636305812636915273noreply@blogger.com